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Fate

When fate took me by the hand and led me into a room, I watched as an apparition wept over a silver tomb.

The tomb was made of metal to cover up all trace, of a girl who's life resembled a joyful grinning face.

The ghost was not translucent, she was really rather opaque; but the expressions she reflected seemed extraordinarily fake.

The tears which came frome her eyes shone like glistening dew, and every time she wept larger her tears grew.

When finally she stood her tears had pierced her heart, and the apparition then realised that she had nor a life or role or part.

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Am so depressed because of Discrimination against how i dress and what music I listen to, being labelled Goth and Emo..

Ever feel as if you have no role in life?

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  • Welcome to All Poetry

    well what can I say other than go you i hate discrimination and I see no need for it, we should al be able to wear and act how we want as long as it is in accoradance with the law ofcourse. I think you will find that a lot of people will agree with the thoughts and opinons that you have placed here and I find this to be meaningful well done.

    Charlotte
    SIte Greeter
  • Welcome to All Poetry

    well what can I say other than go you i hate discrimination and I see no need for it, we should al be able to wear and act how we want as long as it is in accoradance with the law ofcourse. I think you will find that a lot of people will agree with the thoughts and opinons that you have placed here and I find this to be meaningful well done.

    Charlotte
    SIte Greeter
  • that's exactly how i feel too and i agree with you 100%. you did an excellent job on this poem. congratz. :]

  • HEY dont listen to those idiots they just wanna control ur life and by he way it sounds they r...DONT LET THEM..... you have a role in life dont let others make u see wrong wanna talk im here i mite not be on but i'll be around