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soft and fuzzy
-his hair
big and constant
-his smile
blue and sparkling
-his eyes
warm and strong
-his arms
bright and happy
-his laugh
warm and cozy
-him
he is my bf
-Kevin

Author notes

this a poem a wrote about kevin like many others I have written

of fake people

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  • Innocent-Lies
    November 23, 2008
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    very cute.


  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008
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    i like how you describe him, its cute,
    Keep writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy

  • peridotPixi
    May 13, 2008
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    this is cool, i like the flow this poem has and how it tells about him and then it says him, its really deep like that, i hope your BF kevin knows how lucky he is to have such a wonderful GF keep up the writing, -Amy