Never will I want
our kisses to end.
Forever roam me,
then start all
over again.
I can't get too
much of anything
from you.
In sync we are
and in sync we
shall stay.
Let's not let
counting anything
get in our way.
Author notes
PROMPT: when you're in love... when is enough , enough?...
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favorite parts of this piece are... Let's not let
counting anything
get in our way.
I can't get too
much of anything
from you....
this piece spoke to me from the moment i read it... it deserved the gold hands down... thanks for your time and talent... AiM
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I'm counting. I got 12 poems from you out of 20 on my fav's page. You got to get that muse off of the espresso! You're gonna burn that puppy out like this! Ha ha ha. Very nice. I'm just ribbing you because I can.
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Your new image on Author's Page has given you new found, and new fangled confidence, wow, you've turned into ...(drum roll, please)...BOLD MAN wow and you wear it so well hahaha
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a good piece, aye, just go with the flow of love and life and dance the joy into heart shaped clouds, that perhaps could be counted on
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That and...smilelol
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Beautiful, nice sentiment about being in love.
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Thanks Z, hahaha this was another midnight write hahaha I never know how whatever they are bu I like risks...thankslol
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but what happens when the sync becomes distance?
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Are you kidding? I don't anticipate the negative hahahaha if it happens, oh well, but in the meantime...I get never enough of youlol smile
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