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Toying with ambition

 
 
 
 
Ambitiously tracing upon your naked skin
Perfect scarlet nails seeking to flay open your pale white flesh
Lusting to expose you desires
Wanting to take what is hers

Mesmerizing is her unveiled body as she strives to seduce you
Bringing you closer to drugged oblivion
Desperate to feel her scented breath on your wanting neck
Moaning without knowing that she draws your blood

Broken dreams, she breathes, made her love you like this
Crying her hypocritical tears as you cradle her body to yours
Sighing your name as she presses her sweet, innocent lips against you
Caressing your exposed tongue with her manipulation

Iron strength draws you closer to her seductive flame
As she offers herself
Her lying tears claiming that she needs you
Whispering that she'll fulfill your unquenchable lust for just one small favor

Taunting you, she laughs at your weak indecisiveness
Her synthetic broken wings quickly mending at your pitying gaze
Misleading black eyes clouded with triumphant obsessive desire
As you scream out her name, promising shelter and comfort

Icy fingers rend your now useless flesh
She screams with pleasure as you cry out
Shredding your dreams and tearing out your heart as she does petals from roses
Her pale, innocent body a pillar of terror and pain

Ominous are her words as her lying tongue
Cuts away what she wants from you

Notorious is her manipulation
Taking all that's left, ending her prey's ride with her scorching ambition

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  • Mmmm
    I love acoustic poems. Well done.

    Mylee

  • Hekate gold member
    May 15

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    Welcome to AP

    Hello DrizzlingRain,

    This acrostic is very well done! I Must say I am impressed with your format,layout, and all of that. Your wording is good.

    Awesome job.

    Kari,
    Site Greeter