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Magical Mickey

I am in my room, hiding under
My magical Mickey mouse blanket.
I can hear my brothers laughing
And playing without me ‘cause I’m a
Girl... This blanket keeps me safe from
Everything and keeps me cool or warm.

Now I am talking to my cabbage
Patch doll a if she were my
Own little sister. Her hair smells
So good and every time I smell it,
It brings me to a place were I
Can do anything and where she is real.

When I look back, I’m glad I had those
Toys that I had because they made
Me feel like I wasn’t alone or
Afraid or even shy.
They made me stronger for who I
Was and now they do the same
For more little girls...

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  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 10, 2008

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    Cute, I enjoyed this lighthearted piece. Takes me back to when I was a kid also. The last stanza is my favourite. Good work


  • sheltered
    June 28, 2008
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    Clearly endearing.


  • candymiser
    June 25, 2008

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    i like this one

    it actually brought me back in time... it was kinda creepy! o.O but, it's all good! <3 nice write! very visual!

  • AnonyMoore
    June 24, 2008

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    very inspiring

    You sound, no offense, as if you would be a good babysitter. Sorry if that offends you, it's just that I love kids, and to babysit. And its just that you sound like you would be gentle with kids, yet creative, and let them have fun and do projects.


    • Confused CRow
      June 28, 2008
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      actually i do babysit my 3 younger siblings. lol.
      i like it. its fun
      thankx for the comment

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