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A Thousand Angry Angels

You have lived your life
With no remorse for the pain you leave behind,
You play the game...so happily blind
To think you're safe and bulletproof
From the price of your crimes,
The truth is reflected in your eyes
As the face of every victim
Becomes another mirror for your lies ; 

You took that road,
You made your choice,
Forgot every seed you sow
Would grow into another voice ;

Open your eyes ;

Time is not on your side,
You'll never outrun tomorrow
But you're still welcome to try,
You steal the hope from every future you find,
your pockets may be deep
But there's only so much a thief can hide,
I am that shadow staying just beyond your sight,
Only a shiver when you feel my eyes
Softly creeping up your spine ;

You shut your mind,
You closed your heart,
You crossed the line
When you tore their worlds apart ;

Open your eyes ;

It takes a thousand broken hearts
Mixed with the tears of broken dreams,
Forged in the flames of pain and loss
To mold the steel of my wings,
Summoned by the cries of so many lost,
This child shall rise in their suffering,
Cast out from the womb of Shangri La
To birth an angel like me ;

It's too late to open your eyes,
No mercy for the unforgiven,
In righteous deafness to your cries,
No rest for the wicked,
Dance to your chorus of alibis,
Dare touch this Angel Of Vengeance,
No longer will you spill their blood
In the ceremony of the innocent ;

I've been watching you
Cut the souls to bleed the fools,
It's time to understand
Why you should fear the night,
And when I come for you
The hand of fate swings the sword of truth,
A thousand angry angels
Will be on my side ;

You should have opened your eyes :

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  • Sorrow is the name
    May 13, 2008

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    A Very Good Write
    It Flows so Well
    and Goes So Well Itn The Cotest

    Thanks For Entering
    And Good Luck


    • Redrusty66
      May 13, 2008
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      Thanks much for your time and consideration. Always a thrill and an honor when another artist finds worth and value in a piece of work.


  • individuality gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    a good piece, aye time can never be eluded, it stalks our every move. good dark imagery here that moves smoothly along the course.