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Sparrow


Feathers enshroud
sorrow

where once
shell nested

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Prompt: 7 Words to make the hostess cry and fill with emotion.

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  • Merry Christmas
    May 13, 2008

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    I wish I could say this made me cry but sadly it didn't. I could still feel the sorrow though and I felt that this was particularily well written.


  • Synonymous
    May 13, 2008
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    very nice poem
    good luck


  • MysticalRayne
    May 13, 2008
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    Beautifully done my sister ~ best of luck in the contest