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A survivor

You're gone

I'm broken hearted

but surviving

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Just seven amazing words or lines,

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    When we take life in stride and move we are survive
    many sufferings. And our memories help us to do this.


  • tawk gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    Oh such a sad write! It is so sad to lose someone we love the hardest part is going on without them in our lives. What a wonderful write, I think we all learn how to survive and that is what keeps us going each new day. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the Bronze


    • wildfiredreamer
      May 23, 2008
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      thank you, I did not lose him to death but the misfortunes of life, We are still friends. the sad things are I still love him with all my heart, and he is really an awesome guy. I will soon be posting something about how we met and all.


  • Arizona Sunset
    May 16, 2008

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    congrats to you on the bronze...excellent poem! very emotional and touching... blessings always~ Trisha


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    very good

    The seven words you chose are emotional and touching. congrats on the trophy. God bless you, Mark


    • wildfiredreamer
      May 16, 2008
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      Thank you

      yes this is me now but one day I will soar again, don't know when, just know I will, all survivors do.


  • Merry Christmas
    May 13, 2008

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    I liked this but I feel that I might have liked it better had it all been on one line, or divided up between three or perhaps center aligned. But I have no problem with the actual poem, I felt it was quite beautiful.


    • wildfiredreamer
      May 13, 2008
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      I did some changes, I had been gone all day and hadn't got to go back and look at it.


  • Nicada silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    A powerful write with so few words! Great job stating your point and feelings with limited words. You are a survivor! Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Patty


  • Synonymous
    May 13, 2008
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    powerful, a nice twist to a sad poem
    good luck

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