You're gone
I'm broken hearted
but surviving
Author notes
Just seven amazing words or lines,
A contest entry
- 7/15 Quickie. by Merry Christmas.
425 points, ended May 15, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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When we take life in stride and move we are survive
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Oh such a sad write! It is so sad to lose someone we love the hardest part is going on without them in our lives. What a wonderful write, I think we all learn how to survive and that is what keeps us going each new day. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the Bronze
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thank you, I did not lose him to death but the misfortunes of life, We are still friends. the sad things are I still love him with all my heart, and he is really an awesome guy. I will soon be posting something about how we met and all.
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congrats to you on the bronze...excellent poem! very emotional and touching...
blessings always~ Trisha
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very good
The seven words you chose are emotional and touching. congrats on the trophy. God bless you, Mark
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Thank you
yes this is me now but one day I will soar again, don't know when, just know I will, all survivors do.
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I liked this but I feel that I might have liked it better had it all been on one line, or divided up between three or perhaps center aligned. But I have no problem with the actual poem, I felt it was quite beautiful.
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I did some changes, I had been gone all day and hadn't got to go back and look at it.
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A powerful write with so few words! Great job stating your point and feelings with limited words. You are a survivor! Good luck in the contest! Blessings, Patty
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powerful, a nice twist to a sad poem
good luck
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