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Nothing Was Happening

When I walked into
That cold, dark room
I felt a disturbance
In the air.

Everything was still
About you and your
Complexion was as
Fake as this world.

I tried to connect with you
But your eyes were closed
like two gray wings.
Nothing could stare back.

Nothing was moving.
Nothing was happening,
Besides the weeping of
Little children and loves ones...

And Now You’re Mine
--Pablo Neruda--

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