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~Grasping~

Broken and desolate,
abandoned to fend alone

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Picture credit: http://disguy2k.deviantart.com/art/Reaching-4891473
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A contest entry

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  • Kazytc silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    You have done it again!

    You amaze me so much...
    You write so few words here yet you speak volumes, wow what talent and such a fabulous take on the prompt, no wonder this won a gold too.
    Well this again confirms we have a real life Poet Laureate on AP... YOU!
    Well done, love it, fabulous work!
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xxxx


  • Merry Christmas
    May 14, 2008

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    I love this, I really do, it's just so beautiful. I especially love the fact that you did it in only two lines.


  • Synonymous
    May 13, 2008
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    sad, but very well written
    Good luck


  • Gypsie Ink
    May 13, 2008

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    So sad...

    you break my heart with the desperation of this forlorn tree....i pout in earnest

    I HUG THE TREE
    TO BE NO MORE LONELY!

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