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[ I look up.. ]

I look up..
I look down..
and i see a shadow..
I look up..
and there then i see..
It was an angle..
It was a beautiful sight..
and there are his wings..
spread out so far..
it was like a dream come true..
to see an angle..
and angle like you..

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  • Tosh-Tashay
    May 16, 2008

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    this poem is wat I like to call a quik fit its exaactly wat poeple like to look for sweet and simple with lots of imagery.. W/B


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 15, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi feelpain5,
    This is a cute little poem. You have Angel's "L" flipped around though. Thanks for sharing with us at ap. Hope you enjoy your stay here. If you have any questions about the site feel free to ask any of us greeters.

    Greeter Cara

  • awwwww thats so sweet... hope u diont mind if i jot this down ..incase a spec. someone cumes along 4 me...hahah highly doubt it but still its an excellent poem

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