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[ Happiness can not buy a lie ]

Happiness can not buy a lie
nor a sigh...
Oh my my my
sometimes want to cry...
joy is not a toy
my my my i want to cry
sigh sigh sigh

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  • OnEbAdApPlE
    May 13

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    lauren! this was a little weird... sigh sigh sigh?? i dont even get the point of this... sorry hun.. but, ya know... i think you should write "real" poetry.... i am not trying to be mean... but well....
    <333 luv ya. weird write.. lol.

  • yougottacare
    May 13
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    lauren... come on i know you can do better..

  • leland
    May 13
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    lol