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Karmic Hex

Hear this Rhyme,

And do the time,

For actions held,

Within the mind.

Lies you told,

New or old,

Recieve this karma,

Seven fold.

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I love the philosophy of karma, but it's slow...

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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    August 21, 2008

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    OMG... I got the chills, and I'm ready to duck!! Not that it would help any... but...

    I love the philosophy of karma as well, Nice write!

    Hear this Rhyme,

    And do the time,

    For actions held,

    Within the mind.

    Lies you told,

    New or old,

    Recieve this karma,

    Seven fold.

    -- Sorry had to send it back atcha!!

    Amber


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Humm..you are summing up the universal arena through the truths of your poetry.....I love it..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..


  • libithina
    May 25, 2008

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    puts me in the mind of the power of three .. karma a powerful thing .. good write!! s s