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just know i need you

staring into those beautiful brown eyes
I
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Trying to collect myself i scramble
talking real fast and moving my fingers
anything to take up more time

im hopeing this will last
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  e
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not because i want it
but because i need it..
I need your smile, your touch
your my angel my love
I just need you near me
please say you will stay

Its nothing new
L
I
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  S
always begin..
Another test, will you break
will i..
In tears i pray
let this pass.. let tomorrow come
let your beautiful smile surround me once more..

whats the word

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    beautiful

    I feel such love in your poetry for this special person I hope she knows it and cherrishes it daily


  • blackfang4318
    October 15, 2008
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    GREAT JOB

    WOW I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE THOSE WORDS GOING
    DOWN LIKE THAT AND VERY NICE POEM


  • King1love
    July 24, 2008
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    im still here and still fighting the world with you