She comes to you, a whisper,
from silent stars
Passion, raw and unconfined
her touch, leaving your soul bruised
Breasts, crushed to your chest
Bodies, perfectly tuned
as you collide together In passions dance
Close, In the warmth of Intimacy
A contest entry
- Sensual Quickie- Pic Prompt, Come See by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended May 14, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice....im a fan..
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Thankyou for havin a read
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i love these poems
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Aww thanks P I look forward to reading you
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wow, honey thats a deep one... your writing continues to improve all the time... good luck in your competition
cheers
Jen
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Thankyou It's always good to see you agen, hope all is well with you
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Wow this was short and beautifully conveyed thoughts of passion, intimacy and warmth that fulfills the desiring soul...
Love the idea of her touch leaving his soul bruised..
Excellent imagery & take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering & best of luck
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thankyou
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Very nicely done. The words evoke alot of passion.
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Thanks woodchuckers for your visit and comment
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