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Love is like the wind,
sometimes strong
sometimes weak,
but always ,remains unseen.....
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Every road has a destiny,
every decision,an obstacle,
every detour,an opportunity,
taking the right direction ,a miracle...
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wow i absolutly loved this poem no doubt about it...it hit me like gosh i dont know what loved it
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Hi
thanks,they are some thoughts.....
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
Definitely two different thoughts going in this piece, but each with a deep truth and power to remain untouched. Short and simple, yet what a punch this packs to the mind and thought.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing,.
Storm
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I read this on writing.com as well and just as I felt there, I still agree here... this is a beautiful piece, deserving of a fitting title. You have two seperate trains of thought here. I would probably suggest breaking them up and expanding on them but that's just me.
I am looking forward to reading more work from you in the future. Since you are new to our site, let me also say, welcome aboard! I hope you discover us to be a helpful and friendly place for posting your works. I encourage you to take some time to wander the site and check out all that we have to offer here. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any greeter or moderator here.
♥ Touchof1der
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