Tease me please me ,caress me oh so gently
I'm feeling your smooth skin ,laying upon mine
Oh so warm your body is ,as it is laying next to mine
Making me scream ,for even more of you
Let me feel all of your, pulsations oh so true
Remembering that you know, just how I like it so
Come to me again ,for I will then give in once more
To you over and over again ,never ever to end
For I love your tender touch, and sweet caress
That says I love you ,oh so very much,and for you my love is true
Written By: Brenda Gae Harper
May 13, 2008
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The Poem Of Love And Seduction.How A Real Fantasy Really Fells.
A contest entry
- Tease Me by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended May 17, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you feel the warmth around you?
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warm and sensual, and very personal. A lasting, savory piece of intimacy for your beloved. Excellent.
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Ah, love it. This has the passion, the romance and the sensual feelings. So nicely expressed. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Excelent Poem
This is a sweet poem it has ture meaning of love. -
Very moving, visual...
I found your poem a very nice read, the flow and movement of the lines were as gentle and delicate as the words themselves. Quite visual without giving away too much. -
'Teasing me is pleasing me'...
good for me...I love to tease cuties...
'Caress me oh so gently'...
you desrve careful treatment...you're so fragile, delicate and lovely, honey!
'I'm feeling your smooth skin, laying upon mine'...
your skin is so magnetic...so soft!
'Oh so warm your body is'...
it's your sexy body that's generating this warmth in me, my love!
'lying next to mine'...
I feel I'm an a paradise
'Making me scream'...
I'm moaning and screaming too
Let me feel all of you'...
yes...we must explore all possible pleasures from each other's body and soul, my dear!
'I love your tender touch'...
your touch is so sensational!...
'I love you'...
I love and adore your aromatic body and your beautiful soul, sweetie!
A fascinating erotica...
Kisses all over...
Galaxy2
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This is a really good soft erotic piece. I like the message behind it. True love is hard to find. My favorite line in the poem is "For I love your tender touch, and sweet caress" I miss that so much, because sex isn't everything but it is a big part of a relationship. Good luck in the contest! Blessed Be! ♥ ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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This was such a beautifully sensual write bursting passion, love's embrace, and genuine emotions. A shared love that feeds the soul through your words and leaves feelings of contentment, and passion.
Lovely poem!!!
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