The coolest zephyr cannot
quench my baking desire
emanating from loins
softly entrenched with
silken cloth.
Fulfill my fantasy.
Penetrate my imagination
to make dreams of
just me and you
come to fruition.
Come lay beside me.
Enter my passion.
Author notes
ok..so here is my go at it..usually don't do these random writes with limitations..my muse just usually doesn't work that way..so I apologize in advance if this is not what you are looking for..alas ...I made an attempt..
A contest entry
- Sensual Quickie- Pic Prompt, Come See by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended May 14, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty please...
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WOW!!!
Very saucy hun, you want to try these more often
Love this one you've done a fantastic job!
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Love it
There are many sides to this work which I love, one is certainly the erotic while another is of hot passion that in terms flames the same emotional fires. Come lay beside me. Enter my passion. Hmmmmmm, if only.
Love this lots.
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awe... this is a plea of sensation. Outstanding!
best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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thanx Delila...
blessings dear..
namaste..
r
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So passionate and touching! delicate with a feeling of love and desire! Very nice write Sis!!!
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thanx sissy...could not do without your support..you're the best..
blessed be,
r
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Great Job!!
I think you did an awesome job with this!! Great wording - sensual and passionate both. I love the line,
'penetrate my imagination'....
and I love your title! (I like to use the word 'orgasmic'...it's such a delightful, fun word, don't you think?...lol)
best wishes in your contest.
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my dear friend..thanx so much for your support..and from time to time honest critique..means so much to me that you take time to help me..
bleesings..
namaste..
r
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Lovely passionate write with subtle sensuality that is just perfect
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thanx so much for your kind comment..
blessings...
namaste..
r
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Your attempt was beautiful, passionate, and tender. Sensuality is what I asked for and you gave it! Great job!! Thanks for entering & best of luck
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