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Cherished

i cared for you, i cherished you
i listened to you, i loved you

you told me you loved me
told me you cared
gave you all i had
gave you my world

but in the end it wasn't enough
you've found someone new
and now im gone and all i can say is
enough is enough

Author notes

i just wrote this now... sorta self explanatory... my girl found a new guy lol... this is really bad and i prob shouldnt even post it but i cant write much latly so i thought i would put something up even if its bad... go as hard as you want at it, might help me write more. thanks

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  • dawn.of.juliet
    May 22

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    short and [bitter]sweet. strong emotion in so little space. i really love this and im so sorry you had to go through an experience like that but it just goes to show that any thing especially experience can be inspiration for a work of art ^^
    nice work


  • righteousme
    May 17

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    im sorry for your loss.. but know that for every loss there will be a win... open your eyes and look for it... thanks so much for your time and talent... AiM


  • Somebody-New
    May 14

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    nice you write, its been a while since you put anything new up, hope it goes awesome in the contest!

  • liduen silver member
    May 13

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    Thank you for posting this and sharing your feelings with us. Writing and sharing help so much with the recovery process. Your words peirce me and make me sad (in a good way ) Good luck in the contest!


  • I Am Gun
    May 13

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    ahhh the tell old tale of loving someone who doesnt care all they want is someone else. it sure does suck
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