twinkling little sparks
on wet woodened barks
bring forth a tender thought
of gentle hearts we've caught
sprinkling down
lifting a frown
magical dust within the moonlit night
fills the soul with ardent light
captured my fantasies anew
being in love with wonderful you
A contest entry
- Fireflies In The Garden...pif by kaibab.
900 points, ended May 14, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ahhhhhhhh
to have such a sweet love, captured therein, is blissful, loving and filled with loving feelings. fantasies would definitely cease, replaced by reality of soft tender love. Loved this. Keep penning my friend, may your ink never stop flowing.
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This is sweeter grace to weave,
dance to trance romance in wonder,
hoping heaven heels my blunder
of tangled fingers curling under...
a lovely poem...thanks
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comment and the beautiful shiny silver trophy.
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Hallmark Gold Quality: Excellent!!!
Beautiful presentation and script.
I could easily see this as a Hallmark Card. I think you could both work for Hallmark not only writing and designing cards. A+ -
I love the way you make the ending words rhymn. This is such a colorful poem about nature and love. Good luck in the contest.
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Very tender expression. You create many good images with your words, and tell how great it feels to be in love again.
Good luck in the contest!
Jeannette
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fireflies.. they have this magical aura around them
best of luck my lady..
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