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Reunited

Yearning
Reaching
From desperation
To find the missing life source
I once called your love
Returning
Healing

A contest entry

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  • Merry Christmas
    May 14

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    I liked how the first and last two lines are simple, just one word on a line yet the other lines had more, it did much in the effect of the poem.

  • Synonymous
    May 13
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    very nicely penned, I love the way it makes me feel


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    May 13

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    this says so much in so few words, it really wowed me. the imagery that came to mind when i read it was strong.
    best of luck in the contest. keep on writing.


  • Broken Angel Shade gold member
    May 13

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    This said so much in so few lines. I really enjoyed this piece. It had good form and wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep writting