Yearning
Reaching
From desperation
To find the missing life source
I once called your love
Returning
Healing
A contest entry
- 7/15 Quickie. by Merry Christmas.
425 points, ended May 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked how the first and last two lines are simple, just one word on a line yet the other lines had more, it did much in the effect of the poem.
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very nicely penned, I love the way it makes me feel
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this says so much in so few words, it really wowed me. the imagery that came to mind when i read it was strong.
best of luck in the contest. keep on writing.
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This said so much in so few lines. I really enjoyed this piece. It had good form and wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep writting
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