Veiled sunlight
filters past my eyes
as dawn moves
across the horizon,
Sorrows lost to
red fire searing
a place into my soul
faithless wandering
leads to empty dreams
and blind faith leads
you no where,
Blackend roads
of broken light
wail against the
rising of the tide
and we waste away into
nothingness.
But for that moment,
that second, into when
we stare at the dawn
and are whole again-
Author notes
copyright 2006
this is an older one of mine.
A contest entry
- Magic in the Silver Moon by Lone Defender.
500 points, ended May 19, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Forgive me
Doesn't flow well. Couldn't find the message.
Good luck in the contest. I'll look foolish when you win. -
Very nice...works great with the background and color theme, too. Thanks for entering.
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very beautiful! you capture a wonderful picture of dawn!!!
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thanks for the comment. glad you enjoyed it.
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thank you bella
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