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Tender Is The Night



trembling in anticipation and delight

tethered by sweet seduction

this untamed heart palpitates

touching as one

two hands move together

those eyes that sparkle

trail away in ecstasy as

tongues entwine and

tangled limbs in passion, embrace

the moment flawless, feels so right


Author notes

10 Lines that tease.
The title and each of the ten lines must begin with a word that has the letter 'T' in it.

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  • leo2
    May 21, 2008

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    I am always delighted by your ability to touch the soul of desire and make a body tremble. Congratulations on the well deserved award.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 17, 2008

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    If you can close your eyes while trying to read (I know, don't say it!) this has such a vision emblazed in the mind. Sensual for sure. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • TheRealDeal
    May 15, 2008

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    I think I like the ending best of all. There is no better way for a co-mingling between two people to end on. Yes, men too can be romantics. Good luck in the contest.
    JLG


  • Midnight Lace
    May 15, 2008

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    How do you manage to put forth so many wonderful images and soft words that flow so tender and free upon the ears? Your work is always a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
    ~Midnight Lace


  • TXCowgirl
    May 15, 2008
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    oops

  • TXCowgirl
    May 15, 2008

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    I read the contest criteria for this from work when it posted and even played a little on my own time just to see if I could. This is a lot harder than it looks but you sure created a work of art. Good luck to ya!
    TxCowgirl

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