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Lemon Meringue Pie



lemon satin on the tongue
tart but sweet and creamy
alpine peaks of meringue
with a texture so dreamy

a frolic with citrus rush
you hesitate to swallow
the bites of heavenly mush
are shades of sunlit yellow

on which the angels might feed
hints of Vanilla flavor
forming a sweet amber bead
a drop your tongue will savor

I love lemon meringue pie
best dessert under the sky

Author notes

I have a recipe (handed down) that uses sour cream in the filling...yuummmmy!
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  • Amera gold member
    May 15

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    LOL, this makes my mouth water! I had to read this twice simply because it tastes so good.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • azlyn gold member
    May 15

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    OH MY!!! Now I am STARVING!!! That sounds like a slice of heaven...I have a wonderful recipe for lemon pie! There goes my diet...I have to have one now!!!

    Wonderfully delicious write!!!


    Az


  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 15

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    Ohhh I love lemon meringue pie too hehe and anything meringue lol
    so sweet so good...A perfect yummy poem here

    Thank you so much and good luck



    Cindy


  • Mirthryl
    May 14

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    Well, you thoroughly convince the reader why this should be a favorite dessert! Nicely employed senses of taste (sweet, citrus, vanilla, savor) and sight (peaks, sunlit yellow, amber) and touch (satin, texture, mush). Also, long my chosen birthday dessert! Yum!

  • ian sawicki silver member
    May 14

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    you know i had to click in this poem lol hehehe at the picture, a slice! i would just eat the whole thing. a good poem here and yeah it is one of the best, mind you what teeth are left they are sweet


  • perfectsunset
    May 14

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    Wow this was oh so beautiful. The imagery speaks wonders, the taste and smell really creates one in reality. Mmmm lemon meringue pie; so heavenly as your described here so well. "Best dessert under the sky"

    That was a lovely thought, very original good luck in the contest
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