The things I want
They are a must
What I want
Is mostly yyour trust
No I dont cheat
No I dont lie
If you don't believe me
Then I'll say goodbye
I love no one
Except you
I trust you
But I need trust too
If you didn't have my trust
You would cry too
You would do anything
To make me trust you
Turn it around
Now can you see
I didn't do anything wrong
Travis please trust me
I wont hurt you
Believe in me
If you trust
Everythings fine, you'll see
But when you don't trust
It puts me down
I makes me cry
All day I frown
Is that what you want
For me to become you
To tear me apart
To not have feelings too
You think only of you
And the bad i can do
When all I want is love
Just from you
Show me I'm wrong
ANd over come this fear
To trust me
Never again shead a tear
Everything would turn out right
Together we'll forever be
If you do that, I'll lnow
That you truly love me
Happy ending
It will be
Just need that trust
Between you and me
Comments
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Trust is something that I find to be extremely difficult to give. It takes alot for a person to be patient enough with me until I overcome my trust issue with them. It shows me how much a perosn really cares.
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This is all a lie!!!
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Compliments
i think lines 5-8 are the strongest. And I think they express exactly what you are trying to get across with the rest of the poem. I think that if you could find some assistance with these that they would be as expressive and strong as the feelings that caused you to create them.
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