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To Not Go On

I sit and look upon the cold face of life,
Never knowing what it brings,
The first day of school,
the first day of fall,
winter,
than you.

You look upon me with a face of white,
I sit and admire from afar,
I smile,
you frown,
I think "Great day already".

So I sit and wait for you to speak,
as I hear the first words from your porcline lips,
the soft coolness of your breathe,
takes the last bit of strenth my body holds.

The first touch from your stone hands,
the soft touch upon my face,
the freezing feeling upon my lips.

You say lets talk,
Never a good sign,
You say the words that scare me so,
You say you don't think we should go on.

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  • Kleroo gold member
    June 11, 2008
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    sorry forgot the smilie

  • Kleroo gold member
    June 11, 2008
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    Wow the ending really surprised me that doesnt happen very often GREAT JOB


  • Blood Bloom
    June 9, 2008
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    Amazing how such a beautiful image can turn so cruel. Bravo, just utter bravo.


  • lostangel07
    May 13, 2008

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    God...that scene where they seperate and then the months pass by...makes me cry everytime. Good write

  • depressedangelchick
    May 13, 2008

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    that reminds me of the scene when they separate in new moon! i've never forgiven him for doing that to her i think she needs to be with jacob

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