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[ When It Strikes.... ]

                    WHEN IT STRIKES....
            When ones to many and 1000s never enough, 
                when the road you walk seems impossibly tough....
        When you cant live with it but you cant go without,
              when your sick with fear but not sure what about....
            When all that is pleasure is all that is pain,
                when true life and true death are fed through the vein....
      When you dont want to live but you dont want to die,
                            when the low is to low and the high is to high....
                When all you can do is desperatly pray,
                    knowing all the while it wont go away....
        You scream and you scream till your face burns with tears,
                      you scream till your lungs burst but nobody hears....
              When addiction strikes just wait and youll see,
                        theres such a high price for nothing is free....

                Sara
11-4-2004
          11:15pm

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  • daddys girl08
    May 14, 2008
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    tears

    this poem made me cry. so well written. excellent job!


  • Sorrow is the name
    May 13, 2008
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    Very Very Very Good

    This Write Is Excellent
    It Fits So Well in The contest

    Thanks For Entering
    And Good Luck