Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Kari

As the cascading dreams
           falter
your gentle soul
grasps the concepts
to live a wish.

Reviving a smile
that could lighten life
vanquishing sorrows

           withheld.

Generosity,
   dipped its spirit
      in your whole


    with kindness
that shines through 
  lifes' hardships.

As time drops it's petals
you sway with grace and beauty
with a caring hand
and a loving
         heart.

Author notes

a poem for Kari, and thanks to her for all she does

thanks Kari

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 19, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    A great tribute to a wonderful girl!


  • Kari gold member
    May 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Oh my! This is just touching, and so beautiful. I feel so honored. Thank you so much!


    • luna-midnight gold member
      May 17, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      dont thank me, its a thanks to you silly
      thanks for reading, im very glad you liked it


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful dedication. Lovely writing. I love this. Shows a skill in writing this does. Keep it up.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Weltt
    May 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful dedication here. Im sure they will love it!


  • Age of Rain
    May 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You truly are a master of word placement. This is a beautiful poem that your friend will absolutely love. Great work as always.

1 - 6 of 6