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Fireflies on the night

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Fireflies...
Iluminating the night
Admist the dark sky's twilight
  are
Like minature planets
Moving around God's Universe.
Both seen like beacons...
Guiding your eye towards their source...
And their movements are hypnotizing
Slow but rythmatic...
Like the ticking of a clock!
Fireflies of the night...
You bring such beauty yourself,
That I hope...
My heart will light up like you
When I find the love of my dreams...

dragonhearl

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  • kaibab silver member
    May 14

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    You dreams are love in courageous fire
    level raising wind to sire
    fever flowing far and near
    as weathered storm for heart to hear...

    thanks for your lovely entry


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    May 13

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    I like this brings back childhood memories of chasing fireflies in the evening dusk. Thank you for the memories and the smile they brought.