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on the desired hearts------------

Like a stream
flowing swiftly
from heaven's zone,
love sprinkles
passion and fascination
on the desired hearts
in the form of sweet nectar

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It must be love, love, love...!

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  • Li snuffles
    May 13, 2008

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    This made me think of love in spring time, when it is just budding, beautiful piece

    thank you for entering and good luck...xxx