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Thrills. . .

Thrills of excitement...
Chasing me, like Butterflies
Is how you make me feel.
Wondering...
What ectasy of love...
Lies ahead
If I catch you in my dreams...

Dragonheart1

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 17

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    Definitely like what you have here. Especially that last line, it fits in my thoughts right now. Soft and sensual. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm

  • Dragonsong silver member
    May 14

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    From one Dragon to another I applaud you for a very special write! This is so light and airy and allows the mind to wonder and elaborate.. for me the essence of true poetry.

    DragonSong


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    May 13

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww

    this is cute. It feel light and happy. like a dream come true or one that hopefully will. Gentle and precious.