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Christmas Kittens

Climbing for baubles,
Hyperactive fluff balls play,
Curious and cute.

Children playing games,
Watching kittens roll about,
Laughing with their joy.

Adults cleaning up,
Looking at the Christmas tree,
With a cat on top.

AVALANCHE of leaves,
Decorations everywhere,
All on Christmas day!

Author notes

Another poem just past it's season. I'll try to get them up at the correct time of year next time!! ^_^

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  • toomysterious
    July 3, 2008

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    Remembrances are always good even out of season, kittens esp. are always so sweet and cute frolicking and I've had
    many a tree come to this fate. This was a nice way to start my day. Thanks.


  • Hetha
    July 2, 2008

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    It's very true, kittens can be cute and fluffy and sweet, but boy do they ever make such a mess! This was cute, even if it is out of season, it is still cute. Makes me want to cuddle my two full grown cats, in memory of when they were kitty babies..

  • piccola
    July 1, 2008
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    I can visualize this. Nice job.

  • baghdaelf
    May 29, 2008

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    Very cute!

    Dawn,
    Great job! I can actually see it and have heard it happening more than once. My cats of course know better and know they will end up an ornament the next year if they tried it! (j/k!) Great write.


  • MrCrepsley
    May 21, 2008
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    NICE!!!!!!!!! Try to add in abit more detail!!!! Ask me if you need any help!!!!!! Good luck!!!!!

  • MrCrepsley
    May 17, 2008
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    Dawn That was so amazing and cute


  • Candy6
    May 13, 2008
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    cute

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