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in green sheen---------------

In the 'moonlit night' days
every star looks like
a beacon of tumbling light.
when the focus fall on the broad leaves
of lily plants
they dazzle incessantly
in green sheen
and the pests
that desired to damage the plants
look like fire flies wearing a bright mask.
Every dark objective in the garden
thus,takes a deceptive shape.

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  • kaibab silver member
    May 14

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    The search for love is often a challenge,
    one that fires our garden's eyes in illusion
    and often confusion...thanks so much for this wonderful entry


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    May 14
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    Wow--great poem!! Outstanding images twined around a metaphor--outstanding!