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A Meal With A Difference

Liquid eyes
pour out lashings
of passion's nectar
onto lips
baked dry from neglect.

Sweet tasting oils
dress with flavours
that form rivulets
throughout the dish,
spicing the nights
epicurian delight.

To savor the zest
of desirous flesh,
devouring scented bliss
will satiate
the most ravenous
of appetites.

With a soft
rich aftertaste,
this fine banquet
leaves palates replete.


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  • malmadre gold member
    May 15

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    Readers are sated with your rich words! a banquet for the senses..

  • Wow this was so beautifully descriptive with loads of imagery bursting from your lines. Love these lines most

    "Liquid eyes
    pour out lashings
    of passion's nectar
    onto lips
    baked dry from neglect"

    So creative & original. Good luck in the contest
  • Oh me oh me...this is exactly what I asked for hehe

    Mmmmmmm yummy...what great wording..so tasteful and enticing

    Thank you so much, a wonderful write

    Good luck


    Cindy