All around me,
Shadows thicken the air that I breathe
My voice echoes in this hallow world..
My soul walks in the night watching as love and life flow..
Never willing to give up yet every breath that I take is a struggle..
My life is no longer what people think it is..
I watch the clock on the wall wishing that time would pass me by,
Never blinking as I walk through this life in the shadows of my soul..
Breathing in all the acid fumes that love releases..
I watch as families connect,
As eyes meet and love sets in
The hearts that were born to be..
I am the flower in May showers,
Slowly bending to the weight of the rain,
Waiting to break, yet knowing that will never happen...
I am the light in the dark..Whispering to the wind to set me free..
Knowing that this is not my time to live, yet here I am taking another breath..
Fighting for a connection to anything that is willing to deal with a heart hidden in the darkest pit of hell.. Burning in eternal damnation.. for a sin it never did commit..
I slowly fade in this life, willingly letting go of my time..having to give up this hopeless fight..
All around me,
Shadows thicken the air that I breathe
My voice echoes in this hallow world..
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Oh woah!
This is....Gorgeous!
I'm left speechles and captivated in this poem. The flow to beautiful, emotion strong. Wonderful job. I really enjoyed reading this!
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A wonderful poem that meets with truth and pain. Beautiful and exceptional.
Also thank you for your word.
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked this..
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wow... wow.. i just cant stop sayng wow....
first off love the pic... its awesome...
second omg this poem is awesome... and tugs at my heart... love it and love you... hugs my dear... hugs..... if i havent told you lately your awesome.. and i mean it.... glad to call you sis..... -
Hey! i am truly stomped by this wonderful piece. I love it and love this particularly "I am the flower in May showers,
Slowly bending to the weight of the rain,
Waiting to break, yet knowing that will never happen...
I am the light in the dark..Whispering to the wind to set me free..
Knowing that this is not my time to live, yet here I am taking another breath.. " lovely!
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Wow!!! Powerful stuff...
I love this...
Great narrative, metaphor, rhythm & flow...
Dark, compelling & enthralling...
A great write you have here...
Well done!!!
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This is beautiful i think the images youy gave was so powerful that you could have stopped writing at 'breath'. absolutely blown away.
well done hun.
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Emotional
Baby sister never give you. You are light and keep your soul burning bright. You know I am here for you as well
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Never give up the fight sis... I know how very much we want to sometimes.. to just let go of it all..
I'm willing to deal with that heart!!
You need to come to my corner and lay your head on my shoulder hun! It is broad and can carry many hurts and hearts...
This is so sad.. but written so well!!!
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