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bones

there comes a time

when the smoke rolling from cigarettes
is remindful of some of the strangest dreams
and late night
wickedness

that visited

  over the years


it comes 

  from a lack of sleep
and the awful scent of melting steel

though weird

it travels along in everyday life

  constantly rewinds 
                 then plays

the thoughts once had

    back to me

of a bed with names on it

with fingers on the home row
scared

  by the sound of chirping outside the window
I look and find that the night has past by


and  for  nine  fruitless  hours

 

with stentorian music in the

                 background
something had me pounding

                             knuckles and writing random hell fire
I'm in no position to question my own actions
my brow tells stories of people and places

 

I'd rather not advise you visit


it's nothing new

  that I've rattled my brain with hard drugs and fast times
they are both my scars and beauty marks
                      both earned in great detail

and someday it's a given I will die

so lay me out on the autopsy table


find stories

 

wrapped tightly

              

around my bones

 

heard while swimming

through the thunder of riverbeds

that played a tomb to unforgettable grace

 


that which brings me

  from my sleep
and back to the

                 dread of staring back at you

what you call fate

is far from what we read deep within the pages
that were left behind after the great release


what you call a tongue

is nothing more than a

  diving board

high above the dregs of a

  derelict wasteland


pay the tongue for its time
  send it on its way

back down the throat
to another shit eating grin

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  • Nam
    June 6

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    "I heard while swimming" - I don't feel the use of "I" is really needed here. I've read this several times, and that's the only thing that really seems off to me in this entire poem.

    A great poem that you have written here.

    -Nam

  • runewalker
    May 13

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    my brow tells stories of people and places...both my scars and beauty marks find stories...wrapped tightly...
    around my bones...a tongue is nothing more than a diving board ...[to]another shit eating grin

    No doubt.

  • Balldinger silver member
    May 13

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    charmed, I'm sure...

    I look for mashed crackers and all I find is squiggly lines badly named and exonerated for their rough edges. but as always, I marvel at your ability to spin a piece meat into a vegitarian gourmet meal right before our blinded eyes. who needs skin when ya got plenty of bones? ~ EZB


  • Rowan gold member
    May 13

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    There's so many lines I love in this write, one of my favorites of yours. Hits home, on every read.
    Good luck in Nams contest, hon!