You apologise for breaking my heart
You apolaise for rejecting me
You apologize for
everything you've done to me
There's no need to be sorry
All the pain you've caused
Every tear you have made me cry
all the scars on my skin
I dedicate it all to you
There's no need to be sorry
I deserved it all
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i have to wonder if anyone really deserves to be hurt like this. no matter how great revenge may taste, it eventually turns sour in the stomach. thank you for sharing this with me tonight and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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This was good I am not sure what you did to deserve all this but if you say so. Thank you for sharing your feelings with us through your poetry.
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Hello wiggels3,
No one deserves to be hurt like that
It's sad when someone is! I hope that time heals it.
I do have some possible corrections and suggestions that might help.
Apoligies needs changing to Apologies.
evrything needs to be everything.
youv'e needs to be you've
Theres needs to be there's
Possible suggestions :
You apologize for-
breaking my heart,
and rejecting me,
You apologize for
everything you've done to me
There's no need to be sorry
All the pain you've caused
Every tear you have made me cry
all the scars on my skin
I dedicate it all to you
There's no need to be sorry
I deserved it all
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Now, that's just my suggestion.
I do hope that things get better for you soon
Kari,
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hey
Thanks so much, so can i use some of the stuff you used when you rewrote it? -
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Sure! You can use any and all of it
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