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~*~Twinkie~*~

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Time flies by so quick when you're having fun
it doesn't seem like seven years since you were born

You never stop dancing and making us laugh
even when you threw the frog in my bath

Your laugh is contagious, your smile is too
you're loving and caring to all you know

You're a pleasure, a treasure, I'm so glad you're mine
loving you forever till the end of time


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This is my youngest who will be 7yrs old on 6th June...She is a treasure, like my eldest two, they bring joy and laughter into my life everyday. I am truly blessed.

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 6, 2008

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    She is the spitting image of you hun. A little, mini me. Hahahahaha. That was a great poem there. I can see how proud you are of her. She looks adorable. Hahahaha.
    Well done hun. A really good piece here.

    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • Ephiphany
    May 14, 2008

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    Awwww how cute...she looks like you

    covered in all the sugars lovely poem here for Twinkie...love the name.

    Wow, I would have passed out holding a snake though thanks for sharing, always,
    me

    • onesugar gold member
      May 14, 2008
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      Liking your pic sis

      Lilya is definately my double...our baby pics you can't tell the difference.

      I was miles away from that snake and that was a baby. We used to call her twinkle which gradually became twinkie and stuck.

      Always appreciate you reading

      Love ~sugarcookie~

  • midnightblue1272
    May 13, 2008

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    Dead ringer

    Wow! She is a dead ringer for you, sis. What a cutie! You are so blessed. Great dedication to this blessed young girl.


    • onesugar gold member
      May 14, 2008
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      Cheers bro, she is indeed. Thank you for your fab comment.

      Always a pleasure

      your sis ~sugar~


  • Swtpoetryman
    May 13, 2008

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    You're a pleasure, a treasure, I'm so glad you're mine
    loving you forever till the end of time

    A pleasure and a treasure, indeed - and the spitting image of her Mommy which is which is why me littlest mate is known as SEXY LEGS! HE! HE! From that devilish smile on her face and that twinkle in her eye - something tells me that she is about to put that snake in her Mum's bed - just like she was told to do - by a naughty boy like me! HE! HE! There's nothing she won't do to wind her Mum up for a gallon of her favorite Ice Cream! All i said was make SUGAR scream for your Ice Cream - and she was off to the Zoo faster than I could say BOA CONSTRICTOR! LOL!!!!!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.

    • onesugar gold member
      May 14, 2008
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      Yes and mummy is going to get her own back on sexy legs mate one day. There is nothing she won't do to wind me up THANKS TO YOU! LOL!!! Encouraging her to misbehave. I appreciate you reading sweetie even though you are naughty...but I will let you off. Life would be boring without a little bit of mischeif. It's always a pleasure to read your fab comments. We are coming over to collect what is due SOON!
      Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • Dark Otter
    May 13, 2008

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    She's you all over again

    Did you clone yourself. I look at her and see you as a 7 year old. Not all treasures are gold or money, though I see her worth. Take care, Michelle.

    • onesugar gold member
      May 14, 2008
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      yep, she's my double alright. Our baby pictures you can't tell us apart. It's so true not all treasures are gold or money..you can be rich with the beauty that's around you and your family and friends.
      Appreciate you reading my friend.
      Take care, luv ~sweetness~ xx


  • Xmjx
    May 13, 2008
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    Awwww a true description of my little cusion in words lovely and nice warm feel to it


    • onesugar gold member
      May 13, 2008
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      Cheers MJ

      Appreciate you reading.

      See you on the 23rd

      Love aunty Shell xx

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 13, 2008
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    Awww, this is wonderful. Great rhyme too. I love the imagery [throwing the frog into the bath], hahahahaha. Your flow in this is good too hun. Well done. I loved it.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x

    • onesugar gold member
      May 13, 2008
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      LOL!!! She knows I don't like the bloody things and the eldest two dared her to do it. Talk about move quick.
      How can you tell her off she is just so cute. I love em all to bits. She will be 7 on the 6th June. Growing so quick. The time is just flying by...and when that pic was taken I was over the other side of the room...I'm not keen on snakes either LOL!!!
      Thank you hon, for your lovely comment. Always a pleasure.
      Love ~sugar~ xx

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