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Negate your hate
And let your love shine through
For all that was beautiful
Was once found in you.

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  • james119
    May 14, 2008
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    short clear and strong good work


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    It is said that in the mirror of life, we are reflected back, that being true, we should all let love, compassion and goodness shine out. Short but effective! Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der