Tantalizingly she motions,
emotive words whispered as
molten movements draw her girl
prostrating to the floor…
Triumphant glow glistens in her eyes
as submission is acknowledged and
trepidation becomes total surrender.
Infusion of minds as boundaries dissipate
one by one, limits explored
new dimensions exposed…
A contest entry
- Tease Me by StormGoddess.
700 points, ended May 17, 2008, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Well if that isn't secretive seduction. Nicely done with this. Softly sensual yet there is a underlying hardness to this. Very good. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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very challenging and very erotic i must say i think you did a very great excellent job here thanks for sharing your heat
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kewl. i can certainly see where your head is
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lol yes.. you can.. but the question is who was i chatting to last night when this was penned! You have no idea what i would give to just once be allowed to prostate before Her!
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I like how this read. The acrostic along the side did not seem forced. Great job and good luck.
**Master Ktulu**
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nice acrostic!
never a truer word spoken!!! In my mere opinion, unconditional love can only be experienced through this ~shrug~
I guess that's why we are so few and far between huh?
lovely temptation here - well done!
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Thanks Hun.. back at work and battling so decided to take a few minutes out and write just to clear my head.
and yes.. unconditional love and the trust that one finds withing any D/s relationship has to be experienced in order to be truly appreciated. For me the bond that is created through the placing of a collar is much more profound than even a wedding ring could ever signify, it is a symbol of total trust, unrivaled honesty and a magnificent union of souls.
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~standing ovation~
couldn't have said it better myself!
a collar signifies that two are truly one
~nodding head vigorously~
yep yep yep
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