Intermingling is what this thing is called.
Bottom line; can you get my mind aroused?
For you see, my body mostly just follows suit.
If you want me, you'd have to take me whole.
Upon some emotional plane, we'd also have to relate.
Clicking there is where the trail should start.
A precious precursor to my very heart; then roam...
me some more with the silent thingy, your eyes, yes.
I want to see yours, at your worst and at your best.
To take whole eye-fulls of your deepest self in me.
This is the height of devotion and lover's vitality.
I'd like your presence to send off all my inner alarms.
This, of course, should preface, but not kill your other charms.
I'd like the 'cushion' of your arms to feel delightfully good.
So's I can nestle like a chased lady really should; without delay
then could you make this sultry scene become a reality; but swift.
I'd not like to miss anything, and I avoid those nasty rifts.
Hand language would also add fuel to our burning high fire.
Could you hold my hands so cleverly enough to elicit my desire?
Now rounding the love bend is where I tantalize you with touch.
I touch your spirit, soul, body, mind, and all of you as such.
I peak your interest, the way you'd like me to the very most.
The only thing I cannot do is share you, from that I'd coast.
Some love is deep and that's the kind that makes sensuality float.
It would float on streams of delicious over-reaching heights.
A kind of emptying, to receive the natural full-lit-tilt.
A pressing in of sorts into another's soul's domain and staying.
Welcomed; like one welcomes the Sun, rain, petals; un-ordinary things.
Author notes
2lullabyhaven
This poem is about love in terms of sensuality and communication between the partners.
(gentlewinds)
A contest entry
- the language of intercourse and outercourse by Nicolette.
4500 points, ended June 1, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only Hope by only1love4ever.
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Looking for the extra-ordinary in the ordinary.
Inviting the extra-ordinary into the ordinary.
Wonderful
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Yes and yes; get that extra in the 'picture' somehowlol
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I can very much associate with the sentiments expressed here, especially the arousing of the mind… lolol, not many people understand that – so thank you for this!
I also liked the sense of touch here – almost like foreplay! This poem touches on the intellectual, the physical, spiritual and emotional and in that sense relates very well to the contest prompt. I do however think that the poem could do with a bit of tightening up, but overall, I can see that you understood the contest concept.
Thank you for the entry.
~ Nicolette
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this is very well-written, and i truly appreciated all the thoughts and emotions that went into this...
but i have to say a lot of this read like a bio on a personals' site. "my prospective mate should be so, and so, and so..."
still, there's a lot of depth here...honesty mixed with a healthy dose of romanticism and hope.
thanks for entering
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Thank you, hahaha, does it sound like I was scouting?
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Only1love4ever-Reply
I want to see yours, at your worst and at your best.
To take whole eye-fulls of your deepest self in me.
This is the height of devotion and lover's vitality.
I'd like your presence to send off all my inner alarms.
Love is so very deep. It is one affection that I could never disagree, but only with the right person.
It is to be shared I believe with either/or of the sexes. It doesn't really matter which it should be.
But together it will form a connection stronger than any of the currents from the sea. Stronger than any other emotion and stronger than any force from nature.
With love you are to be unstoppable.
Thank you for your lovely contribution.
It is most appreciated.
Have a great day.
God bless.
Good Luck!
~Only1love4ever -
Yes lullaby yes!
Sol
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hahaha you're funny lol and thanks
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Perhaps you have the same problem as with my entry... 'reading like a monologue'? I intend to address this later and maybe we can compare notes?
Apart from that, I personally believe:
That the thoughts you have expressed are WONDERFUL, healthy, admirable and from the woman that you are.
I'm sure that this has been recognised by the judges and you should be proud of this write.
Sol
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hahaha thanks for such a grand commentary on this write, wow, I am
touched lol
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you have me wanting to have sex
reading all this stuff on intercourse has me boiling 
you did nice good luck in the contest
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hahaha Thanks-mission accomplished? hahaha
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a good poem, ah yes keep floating away and smile from the heart, a chased lady, love in the dance of the spirit that shines its light.
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How does one describe the undescribable? hahaha I just took a try at it...
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