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Temptation

Tauntingly embracing as whispers become
gossamer’s silk; tormented departures lurking
within shadow’s fondled curvatures

Held in breaths

Hauntingly familiar deems every caress another
languished, anguished thirst-

‘We’re’ parched beyond deserted pillars
and still, uncharted chasms reverberate underneath
arched architectures—nothing more to speak as the
night plays its climatic ending

Author notes

Good grief my erotica bone has been gone for so long that I can't remember when was the last time I used it

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  • Very nice. Definitely sensual. Love the ending to this, wraps it up perfectly. The whole last paragraph is perfect. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
  • you did cool lol yea you lighted the candles of touch me tease me you had to i read it with a thought
    nice good luck to you in the contest

  • Dragonsong silver member
    May 14

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    Well if it was gone you have surely found it again with this write! Held in breaths indeed... this is devinely erotic while still remaining softa nd sensous..

    Good luck in the contest, not that i think you need it!

    DragonS