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Ma Soeur d'Ame (Intertwining Triolets) - Video Slam

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My sister is a precious soul
her heart is like a perfumed rose
bestowing love an light, her goal
my sister is a precious soul
What mind divides, her heart makes whole
inside her, tree of kindness grows
My sister is a precious soul
her heart is like a perfumed rose

 


Her heart is like a perfumed rose
her presence is a gift of grace
through her, a stream of wisdom flows
her heart is like a perfumed rose
Her face with loving kindness glows
she shares her peace in timeless space
Her heart is like a perfumed rose
her presence is a gift of grace

 


Her presence is a gift of grace
my sister is a precious soul
a present for the human race
her presence is a gift of grace
Her peaceful spirit, I embrace
to gift compassion’s fruit, her role
Her presence is a gift of grace
my sister is a precious soul

 

 

Author notes

for my soul sister jeanne-reenie-iraine, my luxembourgeoise jeanne d’arc   http://allpoetry.com/cherche%20-d%20-ame

 

watch the video – with a personal message from garuda, the chickadee :

http://s247.photobucket.com/albums/gg123/poetmaa/poetic%20compilations/?action=view¤t=85ab5624.pbr  

 

my constantly updated video-poetry : http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3791503

 

photo : “reenie’s rose” (blooming in my garden right now) by maa

 

 

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  • Desire gold member
    June 18, 2008

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    Holy Moly!!

    Oh My What a Gorgeous piece You have versed and this touches deep Beautiful One
    Tears swell my eyes and just Love how You presented this and You are so Precious- Look Precious
    I imagine Reenie smiling after inhaling Your energy
    Just Love this!!
    Love You for all You are~
    You two are Gems~

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too Beautiful
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 18, 2008

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    This is really beautiful and so much feeling to the reading as well. I'm sure that Renee will adore it. Blessings, Gypsy


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    "...her presence is a gift of grace..."

    Soft spoken,
    but with message
    resonating.

    A wondrous piece, dear maa.

    Aesthete


  • Zayra Yves
    May 20, 2008

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    This is really beautiful. Your sister is so lucky.

    Thank you for being such a generous soul who blesses others...

  • Kaelin
    May 17, 2008

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    Very nice. I wish I could feel that way about my sister, but I suppose this goes with being 17. Thanks for this beautiful poem

    Kaelin

  • cherche -d -ame
    May 15, 2008

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    I almost would like to let silence speak louder than words , ma chere petite soeur....because I have no words. To call this beautiful and breath taking doesn't even come close. To try to explain to you what I felt ....there are no words and I hope that deep in your heart you know...the poem is a piece of a Master and I know it is heartfelt. The video tugs at my heartstrings and makes me laugh at the same time, the way Garuda is just bouncing around on top of you. .....a little chicadee that seems desperate to say what he feels. Your eyes ma chere....the twinkle of "un ange du ciel"Thank you does not do it justice, to say I am touched is too little. A treasure to be forever cherished, oui. Larmes de joie seulement pour savoir que tu existe.....dans mon ame, dans mon coeur et dans ma vie. Et d'avoir vu Garuda-----un cadeau de ton coeur pure. Merci for this very special offering.
    I am so glad that I have not been asked to help judge this...
    je t'aime avec le tout de moi,
    reenie


  • MariGoes gold member
    May 13, 2008

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    The video is amazing! Love watching you reciting and love the sound and colour of garuda too!

  • MariGoes gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    Such a precious gift here!
    I haven't visited Reenie's page in long time, which is a shame, but I do know she has a great heart and a wonderful soul. Your poem fits the person she is, delicate and warm.

    Loved the form too, first thought it was a Triolet, but seems to be a variation of.

    Beautiful!


  • teddybearsRangels silver member
    May 13, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    Absolutely awe-inspiring! What a gift you have!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    Nice,


  • Sandal
    May 13, 2008

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    Your lines have much peace and delicacy, as they pay tribute to a lovely lady. I am impressed with the circular form, you have made it look easy. I know it takes great skill. Best wishes to cherche-d-ame and good luck to you!
    PS check line 3.

  • Yemassee silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    I like video poems...I don't have to read anything...

    I met Cherche-ame back when I first joined, she entered a contest of mine, she won I believe. First and only time we had contact I think, isn't that odd that I remember such a thing almost 4 years later?

    The form makes for a peaceful, enjoyable read and Garuda is cute making his two cents known. I hear a chickadee singing right now, outside my window, annoying the life out of me at this early hour.

    If all tributes were this pleasant to read I would read them more.

    Say hello to Gar, give it some seed, it looks hungry.

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