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She keeps staring
at the walls,
letting her eyes fold
like venetian blinds -
whining over
her unsolicited decision
in practicing
chastity.
I, on the otherhand
recite different shapes
of waiting,
at the shower room
with doors open.
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Author notes
inspired by the mood color of 'soho blue'
A contest entry
- Paint by tara wilson.
3500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LOL, this one is a classic pare!!
I can totally relate to the situation, and I think I pretty much know how it feels. A good write!
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reminds me of the time I caught a certain someone doing his version of "waiting" in the shower with the door unlocked. I admit that I teased him relentlessly. And so, I never "caught" him again.
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this is one of those "you're just a guy" and "she's just a girl" thing
something to do with our hormones... i don't know hehe
mmmm sexual tension?
i guess i have to keep my lips sealed
but i love the thought
mmmm nakakarelate
sino ba naman tayo
tao lang
Anna Lee
i admire you for the courage of writing this
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well, isn't this a kinky situation?? I love it...so different and such a moment with a lover...you seem so sexy in this poem, standing there waiting for her to make up her mind...a most interesting poem...
(change recites to recite)
thank you for this entry..
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your paint chip is:
Medium blue - The wave of the moment
http://www.sico.ca/En/Couleur_Interieur_Bleu_Moyen.asp
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