a heart of love
I feel your hurts
though you hide them
and tears fall...
unbridled ...endless
oh that I could reach out
take your hurts...
but I cannot
I hope these tears are enough
they are for you.......
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt(semi-quickie) by Angelflower.
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Very Very well penned!!
--Best of luck in the contest!
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OOh!! this was so touching!! it brought tears
to my eyes!! I really loved this!! you did a wonderful job here!! so heartfelt!!
Best of luck..
Angel
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Tears do indeed cleanse the soul and express that we share another's pain. Beautiful write.
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oh daddy this is such a strong write heartfelt your words are powerful daddy very very powerful:s
i hope ur okie now and evertything is good
lvoe you daddy
with alll my heart i miss talking to you
your AP son
Bedig
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Beautiful
I knew this one was for you...glad you wrote for it.
a wonderful write about a caring heart
Blessings to you
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daddy..
i love you -
This is so wonderful and so touching! You are a shelter to many children, those seeking comfort from their hurts... you heart shows in this write. Just beautiful!
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As each single tear will fall,
"I Am" is standing there
Sweet Spirit will then call
and lead you anywhere...
I shed these tears one by one or you,
He is standing there...
Hold you close inhale your pain too,
He'll release with care.
Dont you worry my dear child
Fathers standing there.
Within His grip He tames the wild,
Your burdends He will bare.
As a spirit of the Gift,
He and I a perfect pair...
By His gentle touch He lifts,
releasing us from despair.
so let me gently wipe your tears,
and God Almighty stands right there.
Joined in spirit, He'll battle all your fears.
Just trust in Him, He follows...everywhere.
Mark~
THIS IS AWESOME
Well done here my friend I loved it.
Love
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