We lay side by side
and then suddenly I know-
This is what "God" means
Author notes
Bizarre look at things
Best and worst aspects.
Comments
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i completely understand this.
amazing!
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I understand what you're saying completely in this poem. (I do random poem searches, in case you were wondering why some stranger is out of the blue commenting your poem) But anyways, I really like this form of poetry (the name escapes me right now).. I feel that in this form of poetry, you are able to say so much, and put so much meaning into something, in a small amount of words. It can be challenging but you've done well.
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