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The Flood

collected in cool cellar storage
rose the tide of turmoil.
setting settled ink spilling
upon open pages.
flooded felled and folded
my masterpiece mires in mold
a decade due of dwelling,
type turned into tatters.
letters lost like love
broken blotched and blown
what was wondrous works
is mulch, mache marmalade

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an attempt at alliterations and a avoidance to the ache of my amity to adversity.

in short, my bedroom flooded and destroyed my paintings, my sketches, my notebooks, my transcribed music. Really pretty much all that i owned that wasn't a solid piece of furnature.

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  • DreamtSong-x
    April 6

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    I'm terribly sorry to hear what happened to all your stuff. It's not easy to deal with, I can imagine. However, it made for a very good write. Outstanding job, your poems haven't yet failed to be anything but great.

    -- Tor