Who do you think you are?
Forever stained by the way my voice crossed your accentuated cheekbones
And impaled your senses upon a doorstep where we would never live. I crushed
A pixelated fantasy that could never be more than words on screen. I saved me
To save yourself from blasphemy. I don't want to be THAT girl. I drag
Myself through the days when night met moonshine reveries and oh my God
This is making me sicker than sunshine. You could NEVER be him. How dare you,
Upset me in my melodramatic self loathing state of affairs, how dare you. Breath.
Forget me.
I'm [not] sorry.
[You could only be a boy, when I needed a man.]
But you made a pretty piece.
Egocentric fuck.
Author notes
You only posted that because I read your journals. You wish you had me again, sorry but I found my happiness. Please, do us all a favour, find yours.
A contest entry
- Clean your Closet. by surface--tension.
500 points, ended June 10, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fuel for the Fire by GypsyEyes.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Not sure why but I laughed my ass off at the title. Genius. Superb write.
Warmest,
Mylee -
lol you sound like me! i love this poem! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! CarnalNineTailedFox
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omg this is amazing lol your words are filled with emotion and i didnt get bored with this at all
xoxo- christina
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Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you were able to enjoy it
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It's amazing as always and i'm slightly assuming it's about Nick?
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Hope things are okie. <333 -
"I drag
Myself through the days when night met moonshine reveries and oh my God
This is making me sicker than sunshine."
That was my favorite part.
I liked the sharpness and aggression of that last line, and the conversational form.
I always seem to lose myself in your words.
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