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We Can Be

There’s a secret garden within our minds we all go to for comfort
A place where we go to, in our quieter moments
To weed out our troubles and plant new seeds to nurture
The strength of ourselves, the desire and determination to fulfil our dreams
Can change reality
What is, can become what was  with a single change of thought and attitude
We can be, what we want to be, if we really want to be.

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  • Touchof1der Moderators member
    May 13

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    Beautiful craftmanship! Your pen is pure gold and filled to the rim. You certainly shine and rise in this one. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der
  • ballisticmonkey3
    May 12

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    Essence of Near Perfection

    I will skip the usual banter and criticisms I usually leave in my comments, simply because I need not write at length to decribe this piece, as Ebert and Roeper already said it best.
    "Two Thumbs Up!"