Keep me close to your heart
In your eyes
So that we may share
Share love that defies
Meet me half way
Envelope me in your love
Inspire joyful tears
Melting the sun above
Instill within me a new confidence
Remain at my side my guiding light
Imprison my heart forever in your soul
Save me from this empty fight
Have me as yours until day relinquishes eternally into night
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I have no idea
Written December 20th, 2003
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haha...love all the "AKA's" Yes, that is a great day
I'm Irish too 
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Hey hey, I dig this one, my favorite day of the year. KIss ME i'm IrIsh!!! GreenPride....Erin Go Braugh... 'Ollave' is gailic for bard or poet.. Dia Lynn...
Ryan O'Hara
AKA
Irish NO'Luck Mc'Drunk
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IrishStout
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Greenblood
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Being of irish descent on my mom's side (who will call me every year on St. pat's day to ensure I'm wearing green), this poem had a particular appeal to me. I was amused, then, after reading the poem, and assuming it was about an Irish or Irish-American boyfriend, to read you "hadn't a clue." That was as fun a revelation as the entire poem. I don't know what inspired the acrostic, but it's a complex line and a very good sequences of images. So regardless of inspiration, my Irish side still approves.
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amazing
wow,this is a geart writting style, and so deep in the love aspect, that it captures the heart, with every line you read.thnx i needed some cheering up, and thank u for the comment and support,and i will keep in mind that u r there to listen, but also keep in mind that i am here to if u need to talk. heres to life, and heres to love.peace. -
I've never really understood why it's 'kiss me i'm irish' why not 'kiss me i'm jewish' 'kiss me i'm mexican' hehe, guess we'll never know. i do like this write though. fav line: 'meet me half way' i think that's key to making a relationship work. for anyone! if only one person is putting forth effort, only one person is getting something out of it...okay, now i'm rambling. great write!
merry christmas
Celimene -
Wow, that is awesome! I'm not Irish, but I look it! Lol. This is seriously well done, I mean a great poem. It's very beautiful, and I mean, just incredibly moving. I mean, just wow. And so, since it's my birthday (at least on your side of the pond) I will happily take you up on the offer. -kisses- Really wonderful write on this. I mean it. It is fantastic.
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Lo0opy
Aww,this was cute. When I read the title. I thought it was gonna be some dorky little poem. But hehe it's cute. well done.
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I'm not Irish but I love the kissing concept lol...that said I loved the poem . I have NEVER been able to right in this style and not end up sound like I was two...actually even you notice I don't know how to write less than 20 lines either way so... Anyway I really loved this piece and I really admire the fact that from what I read you seem to be able to flow in several different mediums.
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well approached
Nice! Few people can approach this style of poem and not come off sounding like a pre-school teacher. You, however, effectively created a piece of work that drew me in and entertained me. ...Without sounding like a pre-school teacher. -
great job :)
Interesting, I like doing little things like this but mine are never as good as this one. Great write Thanks for sharing it, i enjoyed it, keep it up
Sarah
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Aww this is cute. Something new, I'd never be able to make a good acrostic with "Kiss Me I'm Irish" LOL. Very cute, great job! Keep up the good work, I love how you use big words...lucky. LOL
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